Lauraangliss

Here's what the setting sun looks like some evenings at our lake. How can I make it better?

Raspberry Sunset

Sitting
cool metal lawn chair
harbinger of the coming night,
Eyes lifted
to behold God's gift
of sunset,
Heart swelling
filled with an overwhelming awe
Magisterial colors fill the
western sky-
sunflower yellow, kingly gold,
pale pink, periwinkle blue,
reddish raspberry,
Peace fills my soul
as the kaleidoscoping sun
slips behind the mountains